Lit & The Arts A Poem by Me

Discussion in 'Literature & The Arts' started by Icewolf, Dec 8, 2004.

  1. Icewolf

    Icewolf Premium Member

    Day 1

    The dark night chills in the old town square,
    the barren town leaves none to spare,
    the two who meet on the darkest nights,
    with a lantern and the moons silvery light,
    Discussion on the future goes on till late,
    Until a decision is reached on the state,
    The powers decide to play a game,
    Of mystery and of powerful shame,
    When the wheels turn and all is bare,
    The world pales in a consistent stare,
    That such a delicate thing could be seen by few,
    As a fleeting word amongst the dew.


    The End
     
  2. Bleys

    Bleys Phoenix Takes Flight Staff Member

    :cheers:

    What a beautiful poem Icewolf!

    Anymore?
    B.
     
  3. Mizar

    Mizar Premium Member

    Nice icewolf!:up:

    now someone allow me to read some Vogon poetry!:lol:
     
  4. pineappleupsidedown

    pineappleupsidedown Premium Member

    NOOOOO!!!!!


    BEFORE HE OPENS HIS MOUTH!

    ---pineapple
     
  5. tablet

    tablet Premium Member

    Too deep for me.
    Can you tell me?
    How he make that poem please?
    Because his poem rhymes like a river,
    now i'm starting to shiver.

    Look at him.
    Standing slim

    While I'm here
    Waiting in fear

    What is it about?
    Tell me or I'm going to kick you out!

    I have no idea how people write poem.

    I'm trying
    I'm crying
    I'm dying
     
  6. JcMinJapan

    JcMinJapan Premium Member

    Wow, Icy! That SUCKED!!! TERRIBLE DRIBBLE! Not worth the bytes it was written on!!!!!

    Just joking... scared ya huh? ;) That was truly a cool one, I really liked it alot. Keep it up, you have talent for it.
     
  7. Icewolf

    Icewolf Premium Member

    Day 2

    As the two arrange to meet again,
    The world looks and passes.
    The thought that two so innocent,
    Would plan their downfall surpasses,
    Even the most secure of man,
    Does follow the crowd enthralled,
    Madness rules the land,
    For they do hear that the sirens called,
    Their lives have now been signed,
    For they traded them long ago,
    For words covered with nicities,
    And all along they would know,
    How even now they cannot see,
    What trully lies in wait . . .

    The End
     
  8. JcMinJapan

    JcMinJapan Premium Member

    Awesome! You really have a talent for this.. Make sure you copywrite this stuff. ;)

    [Edited on 9-12-2004 by JcMinJapan]
     
  9. Icewolf

    Icewolf Premium Member

    Day 3

    As time goes on no one knows,
    How evil just grows and grows,
    The dark maze draws attention,
    To mysterious movements of apprehension,
    As the men delve deeply into talk,
    Of the horror which awaits all who stalk,
    The creature of power so great,
    The answer to the question the hunt's at stake,
    As the talk continues amongst the two,
    Leaves fall from the trees and subdue,
    They lie in piles of two's and three's,
    Powerful steps have to be taken,
    To be safe from the peril awakened,
    For the two alone cannot fullfil,
    The quest undertaken with their skills,
    In secret times all is profound.

    The End
     
  10. pineappleupsidedown

    pineappleupsidedown Premium Member

    isnt everything posted here supposed to be property of ID?

    ---pineapple
     
  11. tablet

    tablet Premium Member

    Such a mysterious poem

    What formula did you used?
    It must have been out of the blue
    For I haven't got a clue.

    Tell me now,
    Tell me how

    So I can start making one,
    just to have some fun.
     
  12. Icewolf

    Icewolf Premium Member

    you know i will go on until you stop me. (actually this will finish at about day 5/6/7/8/9. . .)

    Day 4

    The two men arrived again,
    They had succeeded in deterring them,
    Like binary stars hidden in plain sight,
    From the path which would lead them right,
    They lifted their glasses a toast to drink,
    On the wealth of innocence which was sure to shrink,
    The hunters, hunted, irony was sweet,
    Yet time would show how they'd meet,
    The plans unfolded as time grew old,
    Soon all would have to be told.
    The race was on.

    The End
     
  13. Icewolf

    Icewolf Premium Member

    Ok, I've decided that that'll do it till someone asks for another :D
     
  14. OhIgnorantOne

    OhIgnorantOne Member

    "Don't Confine My Soul"

    My people are the various people of the world
    Not just here or there, but every place I go
    There are no borders to hold back my love
    And no barbed wires to pierce my soul
    There is no difference between us in my eyes
    You are a body of energy, emotions, and soul
    But of all those things you see, so too am I

    Oceans to me are part of a pleasant journey
    A diversion from one piece of dry earth
    Culminating simply to another distant shore
    And in the end of that wondrous adventure
    The discovery is that I find...just so much more
    So if your own celebrations and rituals
    Either resemble or vastly differ from mine
    I ask only of each and every one of you
    Simply, that you share with me your knowledge
    So I too may increase my soul and my mind.

    copyrighted by me, myself, and i at Lib. of Cong. decades ago.

    :love:
     
  15. Icewolf your poetry rocks don't pay attention to anyone that downs it,
    poetry of the soul...surely the way to go
    I must admit
    that it's the chit.

    just an ole hippy here
    have no fear
     
  16. badkitty

    badkitty Member

    Ice -very cool!

    I expected 7 days - you must continue.
     
  17. Icewolf

    Icewolf Premium Member

    *cough* *cough* maybe I will, have you cjecked out the new brainteaser in brainteaser?
     
  18. Icewolf

    Icewolf Premium Member

    Day 5

    The time has come again, night has come.
    The relic hunters have begun
    A quest on which time will rest
    The darkness shrouds and covers best
    The puppets strings are pulled this way
    And so they have no say
    A game is on which shall prove
    The most dangerous puppet will be hardest to move
    The wheels have turned and now shall start
    The begining, the end, the dark.
     
  19. Waxy cheesecake

    Waxy cheesecake Premium Member

    You're really good! Keep them coming.:)
     
  20. helenheaven

    helenheaven Premium Member

    Icewolf, do your poems have anything to do with Black labyrinth?